Rebutting a Rebuttal – Or Some Junk!

My good friend Dave has decided to enter the fray and respond in verse to my most recent poem, which I now confess was written for him after he criticized my non-rhyming style of poetry. You can read his response to my last poem here. In an effort to show that I am king of the rhyme, I offer you my rebuttal to his rebuttal. I am sure this will go on ad infinitum.
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Wrung
Stung
Feels dejected

Torn
Worn
Unrespected

Fight
Night
Unsuccessful

Whipped
Licked
Broken vessel

Cry
Sigh
You’ve been tested

Why
Try
You’ve been bested

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